Plot points, side stories, conflicts, clashes, and small scenarios are all there, but it's lacking a main driving force or a thread of conflict to push things forward...

We discussed it in the group for ages with no result, and Fatty Chicken has been racking his brains all afternoon but still can't figure it out. Without this crucial element to drive the narrative and provide its core, it will feel very scattered—

Waaaaah x﹏x

Taking a day off, I'll think it over properly.

Will make it up to you!